Coming Proofreaders wanted for StormRing RPG

[Megaton Games]

Hi!
Megaton Games is a small gaming company with the best-selling QuestCore RPG system. We are at a critical stage with our upcoming game StormRing Fantasy RPG. Its is almost ready for beta but we need to have a round of proofreading. If you want to help it would be much appreciated. it sis currently at 73 pages but will probably end up at about 100+ pages.
Contributors will receive digital copy and attribution. Share of profits may be possible depending on the level of contribution.
Best regards
Megaton Games
info@megatongames.com

 

[Wofano Wotanto]

Well, you don't need any of those colons (for example, "In Conclusion:") in the character class section, and the capitalization of Mystic/mystic in the Mystic Arts sections seems erratic.

Do you have a style guide you're trying to use for the book?

 

[Megaton Games]

Thanks for your quick reply. Yes, the colons need to be removed. Thanks. I know there are many more things.

We do not have a style guide at the moment. We are aiming for a "neutral" language.

Again, thanks!
Claes
Megaton Games