Impeesa said:
BenBrown - don't mean to be picky, but for 'natural iambic pentameter' you've got an awful lot of dactylic feet liberally sprinkled around.
--Impeesa--
It's hard enough to get the lines to scan
And stay on topic--both at the same time.
While on the fly there is no time to plan.
Imagine if I'd tried to make it rhyme.
Without revision (see the other thread)
I'm not going to come up with sterling verse.
I could have written lengthy prose. Instead,
I made a choice: poetical and terse.
And as for making verbs and nouns agree,
I must admit I missed that one up there.
I will do better next time, and you'll see!
(You will, because I certainly will share.)
But I don't think that one completely stank,
Although it's true, the verse was pretty blank.